I got fired.
I'd been hired to rewrite a screenplay but was suffering the
worst bout of writer's block I'd ever encountered. My anxiety
over the looming deadline only made things worse as I struggled,
all day every day, to form even a single coherent sentence on
the page. Every day I'd come downstairs, boot up and sit,
staring hour after hour at the blank screen. Making matters
worse, my client was out of the country and not reachable by
phone or email. finding no ready draft when he returned, he
became furious, fired me and demanded his money back. It wasn't
the first time I'd been fired, not even the first time I'd been
fired by him, but it stung quite a bit. I had to shake off the
I've found the only way to break writer's block is to write, which seems self-defeating because, when you have writer's block, writing is the very last thing you want to do. Since I couldn't make any progress at all with the screenplay, I decided to write something else. I just started writing and kept writing, no matter how awful it was, until the ink began to flow from the pen once again. It took maybe a couple weeks of writing absolute gibberish before I finally managed to break through: I was a writer again, I was enjoying myself again. My writing exercise became the novel Zion.
I like NY cop stories. Dual, a previous novel I've had in mothballs since 1993, was a love story wrapped in an NYPD story, and Blue, which I started right after Dual but have yet to finish, is also a love story wrapped in an NYPD story. With Zion, I started to again write a love story wrapped in an NYPD story but instead took a turn toward the FDNY, making Zion's protagonist a NYC arson investigator. This required more research than I could possibly have imagined, leading to many times my asking myself why I made that choice while slamming my head into my PC monitor.
The exercise yielded a love-hate story wrapped in a procedural crime drama. Much like the cancelled-before-it-ever-shipped Concrete Jungle: Legend of The Black Lion, Zion is a cynical urban fable about bad guys and worse guys. A world painted entirely in shades of gray, Zion is populated with quirky, complex, and deeply flawed characters in an overarching theme which deconstructs the meaning of love and the relevance of faith.
I've published it under the name "James Priest" to avoid further confusion with the British novelist Christopher Priest, whom I am quite certain has been driven insane from typing, "No, I don't write Black Panther" thousands of times.
Too Much This For That
Zion: A Love Story is a procedural crime drama about
Michael Zoë Dallas, a New York City Fire Marshal, who is
investigating the arson of a church with whose married pastor
she’s been having an affair. The story concerns the New Greater
Mount Zion Missionary Baptist Church, the dominant megachurch in
Far Rockaway, Queens, which is destroyed in a firebombing. Zion
is revealed to have been a clandestine money-laundering “bank”
run by an alliance of local ministers on behalf of a dangerous
drug cartel under the protection of corrupt police officials.
Zion's destruction un-settles the fragile alliance, turning the
players against one another and all of them looking for Kai
Tremaine, Mount Zion's pastor, who has vanished under a cloud of
suspicion. Dallas, the arson investigator, is the last person to
have seen Tremaine alive. With time running out, Dallas finds
herself struggling to find meaning in faith, morality, and love
as she is pushed well beyond her arson investigator’s role.
Caught in the crossfire between the disintegrating
cops-preachers-crooks alliance, she furtive-y attempts to
unravel the deepening mystery of Zion’s bombing and its pastor’s
Themes: the meaning of faith, the quality of ethics and morality, police/firefighter drama. 162,000 words / 39 Chapters / 553 Pages.
The novel finds its earliest inspiration in the 1970 Ossie Davis comedy feature film Cotton Comes Tor Harlem, based upon the Chester Himes novel which presented a cynically comedic view of the black church as a carnival hustle. The Reverend Deke O’Malley is selling back-to-Africa trips to northern Manhattan’s impoverished black community and hiding the cash from his hustle inside a huge bail of cotton which is lost in a police chase.
A much more complex procedural crime drama, Zion tells a story of similar corruption at the heart of a black church community in Far Rockaway, Queens, led by a similarly young and charismatic pastor as Calvin Lockhart’s brilliant caricature. Forty-three years later, these are the same Church Folk, blindly allegiant to if not worshipful of their pastor as he baldly exploits them for his own purposes. This hero worship, and the corruption it fosters, is the central theme of Zion, which became a kind of narrative catharsis for my great disappointment with the current iteration of our African American Christian heritage.
The novel, which my agent describes as too Christian for commercial resellers and too profane for Christian bookstores, has, as its core audience, primarily readers who like my work. The book should also appeal to fans of oddball yarns like Elmore Leonard novels.
The Kindle version can be downloaded here, and you don't need to own a Kindle (or even a tablet) to read it. If you grab it, please do me a solid and post a comment on Amazon, let me know what you think.
Christopher J. Priest
22 October 2014